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As I do what you say
You just sit there and laugh
My mouth is shut to keep the words in
That could not help me at all
The pain of you near in greater then you think
I am you pet
I have no way to bite back
You put something in my soul
I can not say a word and when I do
I get hurt with words and hits
You still stand over me like a owner
I'm stuck in this world
No way to speck
I'm lost
No words
:iconnisshiko-night:

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:iconnelleke:
Very well written. I hope you've fixed it, as you state 'was' in the description. Obviously I don't know what the situation was, but sometimes it's good to bite back. It can outweight the pain it causes.

Anyway, I'm glad you uploaded something again! Just one tiny thing, in the fifth sentence, is that really supposed to be 'in', or 'is'?

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